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Made You Flinch

by Paul Taylor on August 28, 2016 at 9:22 pm
Story: Wapsi-Archive
Characters: Bud, Castela, Shelly
Location: Canyon De Chelly

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Discussion (37) ¬

  1. Jeff Weiner
    August 28, 2016, 9:24 pm | # | Reply

    C`mon! The kid needs some guidance, not cheering about her powers.

    • BarGamer
      August 28, 2016, 10:20 pm | # | Reply

      Looks like she needs a… “Mindful Education.” *Sings “Here Comes a Thought,” from Steven Universe.*

    • Michael Birks
      August 29, 2016, 5:43 am | # | Reply

      *Shelly* & Guidance. Two of these things do not go together.

      I see a need for straight talking. Grandma Lilly and Jin would seem to be the go tos.

      OTOH, put Pickle in front of Tina. Just Because.

      • Guesticus
        August 29, 2016, 11:07 am | #

        Why? What has Tina ever done to you? o_O

      • Michael Birks
        August 29, 2016, 9:05 pm | #

        Nothing, I just want the Cabal to read her.

        And offer her a fluffy. Caffeine, Pickle doesn’t need.

      • TazManiac
        August 29, 2016, 10:12 pm | #

        ‘Pickel in frontof Tina’ is a great idea. They both shoot straight from the hip, sometimes without wanting to…

        “Hi Tumbleweed!, you look down in the dumps; here’s an Organic Mango Lasse, just for you…”

    • Vorlonagent
      August 29, 2016, 1:01 pm | # | Reply

      This should be right up Bud’s ally…

  2. The Old Wolf
    August 28, 2016, 9:30 pm | # | Reply

    I think Pickle is my new favorite character.

  3. Dean
    August 28, 2016, 10:45 pm | # | Reply

    Honestly, who says ‘tween’ in an actual conversation?

    • Boxilar
      August 28, 2016, 11:40 pm | # | Reply

      She’s created from something a lot older than she herself is. The Blackthorn was ancient and wise and she occasionally shows flashes of its wisdom. Castella knows exactly what she is. She wants to be something else.

    • Fogel
      August 29, 2016, 5:30 am | # | Reply

      So, what: “pre-teen”? “Middle-schooler”? “Tween” is different, and useful when apt.

    • DSL
      August 30, 2016, 6:02 am | # | Reply

      Couple people I know, doing their best to raise ’em.
      I’m sure there are others; my personal circle isn’t that big.

  4. warhorse
    August 28, 2016, 11:14 pm | # | Reply

    this reminds me of the Iron Giant

    “I am not a gun!”

    • Jeff Weiner
      August 28, 2016, 11:30 pm | # | Reply

      Reminds me of someone who said there was a young woman inside, that had feelings.

      Her name was Acacia Budur…

      • Michael Birks
        August 29, 2016, 5:45 am | #

        oooh. Pickle vs Coalesced Chimera. We’ve got a spare planet, right?

    • fairportfan
      August 29, 2016, 7:37 am | # | Reply

      Remember – the IG had to be TAUGHT and REMINDED that he didn’t HAVE to be a gun.

  5. Ayshela
    August 29, 2016, 1:31 am | # | Reply

    Damn, I want to hug Pickle. =(

  6. Gyrre
    August 29, 2016, 3:28 am | # | Reply

    Poor kid.

  7. ksclaw
    August 29, 2016, 3:52 am | # | Reply

    Aw sweetie… you *are* just a tween, you’ve just got a lot of extra stuff on the side.

  8. Michael Birks
    August 29, 2016, 4:23 am | # | Reply

    In a world of overpowered supers, I do believe we’ve just met our Lyta Alexander.

    “Pleased to meet you, Mr Garibaldi.”

    • Sithspit
      August 29, 2016, 5:20 am | # | Reply

      Nice….nice.

    • Sjmcc13
      August 29, 2016, 7:30 am | # | Reply

      I saw the end first while scanning the page, and read that in Londo’s voice…. 🙁

      • sheik
        August 29, 2016, 1:31 pm | #

        “Vatever it is, It Can’t Be That Bad.”

      • sjmcc13
        August 29, 2016, 3:04 pm | #

        My fave is still :
        Londo: But this…this, this, this is like… being nibbled to death by, uh…Pah! What are those Earth creatures called? Feathers, long bill, webbed feet…go “quack”.
        Vir: Cats.
        Londo: Cats! I’m being nibbled to death by cats.

      • Michael Birks
        August 29, 2016, 9:03 pm | #

        I prefer the ‘negative personality’ scene.

        Londo: Vir, you have what the Earthers call a negative personality.
        Vir: No I don’t!
        Londo: There, see?

      • Michael Birks
        August 29, 2016, 9:09 pm | #

        Londo rose from comic to tragic – He didn’t get near the scary-WMD that Lyta hit.

  9. Syncline
    August 29, 2016, 6:08 am | # | Reply

    Gotta say it.
    That’s a stunning bit of control, coming from someone who just discovered this power.
    I was expecting to see a charred stump there.

    • Michael Birks
      August 29, 2016, 6:40 am | # | Reply

      It might just be a touch-range power. I don’t think we’ve seen her ZOT! anything she wasn’t actually touching.

    • Knighttrap
      August 29, 2016, 7:07 am | # | Reply

      Also, if you remember. She first used these powers before the time jump. She fried a toy. Don’t remember the comic, but its been a while.

      • Michael Birks
        August 29, 2016, 7:33 am | #

        May 11, 2015: http://wapsisquare.com/comic/something-bad/

  10. Crystalalarm
    August 29, 2016, 7:50 am | # | Reply

    Pickle might need Monica, Phix, Nudge, or some of the other titan class girls to readjust her attitude. Misunderstanding your place on the food chain can get you killed and she needs to be shown that she might not be as high up on it as she thinks before she falls prey to the mongoose effect, a mongoose can kill a cobra they’re designed for that put them in with a viper though and they’re lunch.

    • Granitefish
      August 29, 2016, 11:07 am | # | Reply

      Maybe if she wanted to fight or kill yes. But she doesn’t. She doesn’t need to be shown her place on the food chain because she doesn’t want to be in the food chain she wants to be a normal girl. She needs understanding and help not beat up.

      • Guesticus
        August 29, 2016, 11:12 am | #

        Agrecian: she has no intent, or desire, to use her ‘powers’ at all
        Although, that being said, she does need someone to help her control her powers, we don’t want poor Timothy getting *ZOT*ed because he got fresh one day and she just meant to slap him

      • Granitefish
        August 29, 2016, 11:24 am | #

        Help control yeah but that’s not what “being shown their place on the food chain” is. The main issue in this scene is they are praising abilities she doesn’t want. Especially since she’s in the valley to vent without hurting anyone. She seems to have decent control over her abilities already as well.

  11. Centaur71
    August 29, 2016, 9:47 am | # | Reply

    Alas, the plasma cannon who would be Child; what do you do when a WMD bomb doesn’t want to be a bomb anymore? Bud knows this answer…

  12. Varkas
    August 29, 2016, 11:25 am | # | Reply

    Pickle has a surprisingly mature outlook on herself…more so than Bud and Shelly apparently do. She knows what she doesn’t want to become, how mixed up she can get at her age…and that being reminded at how “cool” her powers that make her what she fears becoming isn’t the best route

  13. Matt Grayson
    April 1, 2019, 12:37 pm | # | Reply

    I think pickle needs a “don’t point a loaded plasma cannon at anything you don’t intend to kill” lesson. A sudden swat into a nearby canyon wall from a giant Sphinx might do it. Or a reminder that Bud can throw a fast ball at 1/3 the speed of light.

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